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Name: Corina Grazutis
Story: Miami Beach Snaps 2 Year Winless Streak
Section: High School Sports
Deadline: Today: 09-21-07
In general, I think your story is about:
The Miami Beach Senior High school football team breaking their losing streak and winning Wednesday night’s game against Miami High with a field goal.
I think the facts of this story are: According to:
Who? Miami Beach Senior High School; Miami Senior High
What? MBSH won again Miami High in Wednesday night’s football game.
Where? Memorial Field at Flamingo Park
When? Wednesday, September 19, 2007
Why? Wanting to win?
How? Winning field goal by Jorge Hincapie
I think the most important elements of your story are:
How they won, who they won against, and what peoples’ opinions are on the subject.
This is how I would rewrite your lead:
Miami Beach Senior High School broke their losing streak Wednesday night against Miami High with a winning field goal by Jorge Hincapie.
Terms or ideas you need to explain in your own words or with quotes:
How the other football players on the team feel about winning our football game
Names of sources you should still talk to for quotes:
1. students at Miami High
2. Teachers
3. students at Beach High
4. more coaches